Crumbs: Comic and Title Page Art Comparisons

We all know what I'm going to say about this late entry so there's not really any need to say it. Onto progress!

In terms of the Crumbs buffer, the main issue I'd been having with it was how long it would take to do one page. If you recall, I used to do lineart in Illustrator before doing everything else in Photoshop. Here is an example from the previous edition of the comic.

God, Pink was such a blabber beak.

As my colouring/shading methods have developed, I've noticed that I take way too much time on one individual image, let alone an entire comic page. So I have come to the decision that the in depth shading/textured images will be saved for posters, title pages, concept art, basically anything but the actual comic pages themselves.

I'm hoping that doesn't come across as false advertising. Eek.

Now, at first this left me with a dilemma as I'd used that method to create artwork for a while now. It was basically like learning how to breakdance after only doing tap for so long. Rather different methods. But I've played around with some techniques and I'm quite happy with this one. It'll mean comic pages are done at a much faster pace. And it's a lot easier than breakdancing.

I've always loved the artwork from Rayman Origins and wanted to see if I could recreate such a design for the comic pages. Obviously they'll have their differences but I loved such a contemporary look for the characters and with it being much quicker for me to do, I'm feeling a lot more optimistic. I still need to work on the lineart skills but I'm having fun with it, which is nice.

The pose of Lilac and Twig is from the title page of the first arc. It was originally the one with all the pigeons and Tita in the rap pose but as they're not heavily focused on until the second arc, I've decided to make that the second title page. And maybe a poster design.

I want it all up in my wall.

Crumbs: More Concept Arts

To everyone who has had a look at the Crumbs website so far and offered feedback, thank you so much! I knew there would be a few things I'd miss such as links and typos so the fresh eyes have been extremely helpful.

It's also good to note all this down now so I can develop my vlog discussing the website and comic. I'm hoping to have all that out by next friday, possibly. We'll need to see.

You can still have a look and offer feedback if you still want to/haven't already!

Anyway, I didn't get a LOT of work done yesterday cos I made the mistake of buying Plague Inc for my iPad for 'research reasons' (sort of) and uh… well, yesterday kind of flew by. SO I figured I'd share a few pieces of concept artwork from Crumbs today. Normally I just share one piece per entry but eh, I'm feeling generous. And also I have other upcoming things to discuss.

So, lets have a looksee at some story/character developments. Mostly character.

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Some further playing about with this adorable couple and their designs. I kind of picture this being them in college or something as they look a bit young here. Whether they were dating or not at this point is still undecided but they're known each other for so long that they were pretty much into the sweet old married couple territory anyway. So it's hard to tell.

Anyway at this point, Jude is studying Zoology and is planning on obtaining a PhD to study pigeons specifically. As you can imagine, bar from going to college, she doesn't get out much. Carrie studies Sociology and volunteers at the Wingview Softpaws kennels. She's a huge dog lover yet not a big people person. Way to spend your lolly on the wrong degree, numpty.

Every wannabe ornithologist needs a 'birdbrain' t-shirt. And pretty much every piece of clothing Carrie has bears the Softpaws logo.

I hadn't actually drawn much of these two together and I'd done virtually nothing on Fizz so it was about time I introduced the two. Not much to say really, just a little something showing the besties together.

Blue works more out on the field, fetching any pigeons who need protection and bringing them back to the coop. Fizz is banned from field work as she'd go right into the Breadwinners building and take no prisoners so she's being trained for counselling the plague victims.

To anyone wondering what the hell kind of pigeon Fizz is supposed to be, she's one of these lovely Sherazi pigeon beauties. The concept art doesn't really show her off very well so I need to do a little collection of sketches entirely for her. She'd love that.

Urgh, THIS picture kicked my ass and I'm still not entirely happy with it but eh, it was mainly a shading experiment. Gone a bit wrong. At least in my opinion. Ho hum.

I seem to like drawing all the main dogs together. Although Rocky should PROBABLY be with the blind person he's supposed to be helping. Friggin slacker, no wonder you're finding it hard to get work.

But yeah, not a huge point to this one. I guess I do like how the dogs themselves came out. I'm getting a bit better at keeping Tita consistent. And Snaps is so derpily adorable.

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So progress on Crumbs is coming by nicely. The buffer is starting to slowly chug away now and I'm going to battle not to have it slowly taper out like last time. At least not before the first story is finished. But I'm feeling a lot more in control this time round rather than "I have no idea what I'm doing". Lets hope that keeps taking.

Just a quick question to everyone though; I'm not sure if I should have all the characters on the one subpage, after the one telling the reader what the story is about. Does anyone have a preference?

Anywho, now to script the vlog and the rest of the comic.

To everyone who has had a look at the Crumbs website so far and offered feedback, thank you

Bertie Article In the Journal ft Crumbs Website Open for Testing

I know I said I'd update the blog on Tuesdays and Thursdays but that was mainly for something to show on the days when Crumbs doesn't upload. As it's not gonna do that until the 15th September, I've decided to blog on Mon/Wed/Fri every week until Crumbs pages can fill that slot. Then I'll update here on Tues/Thurs to be all super productive.

And I'll have weekends off. Cos I gotta sleep sometime.

Anywho, lets get to business. It seems fitting to discuss the Bertie Blue article on this date in particular.

Bertie Blue in the Journal

Remember when I briefly mentioned that I was called by someone at the Journal newspaper to discuss the Bertie Blue series? Well, it was featured in Saturdays copy of the paper! I was quite surprised at the spread, I didn't expect it to be as big as it was!

It even briefly mentions Crumbs a little! Barbara Hodgson, the woman who interviewed me, was quite interested in the story and in the Bertie Blue books as well. I'm quite satisfied with the spread and I'm hoping it helps the series and even my own work take off. Thanks to everyone who bought a copy and helped spread the word!

And yeah I totally mentioned this in my 'about' tab under the 'press' option. With Bertie being mentioned in two papers now, I figured it would be good to mention. Can't hurt, after all!

Speaking of tabs, you might have noticed a bunch of news ones/old one gone missing. I've basically decided to combine the 'about' and 'contacts' pages, leaves less clutter. I also decided to put a new tab specifically to purchase the Bertie Blue books through. I'm considering making an online store for the books and my own potential merchandise (once I get that up and going) but until then, the books can be bought through the super alliterative 'Buy Bertie Blue Books' tab.

Also there are donate tabs for PayPal and Patreon for those who want to lend some support and also a tab for Crumbs. Speaking of Crumbs…

Crumbs Website Opening (Without Comic)

As it says on the tin. I am opening the website up, sans comic, for people to look through, test the links and pages for me and let me know of anything I might have overlooked. I have a few beta testers but if anyone wishes to look through it for me, I'd appreciate it! The more feedback, the better.

Click here to be directed to the website!

Just a quick note, there will be a 'comic' tab and the 'Latest Page' option at the bottom will lead you to the comics current page. Once it starts uploading, of course. Then I'll have the vlog launched by the 15th August talking about the features, the comic and my intentions with it. Like that really crap one I did for college that we will never discuss ever again.

I'll close this entry with a bit of concept art for the comic. Jay is the one who designed those weird plague doctorish masks that Crumbs uses to protect themselves against the toxin so I wanted to do a little something capturing that.

He totally used Blue as a model, fyi.

Also, this is the image I'll probably use for the 'coming soon' image when/if I close the site again. It seems kind of fitting, in my opinion. 

I'm really getting excited about these projects and I hope everyone else will find them interesting. I'll update again on Wednesday, probably with more concept art and sketches.

Until then!